Pregnant,
winter clouds
wield
lightning as a weapon;
spring returns to bed.
I have
always liked haiku. There is a simple
elegance in expressing one idea in finite space, which forces use of concrete
language. Early haiku were generally
about the seasons in some way, and always about nature.
I really like the Haiku Jared. It is very challenging to capture an effect succinctly but I feel you genuinely captured the feeling of today's clouds in an elegant way!
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